Tuesday, September 7, 2010

PLN4

I read the article,  "Woman killed as jeep falls more than 1,000 feet, "by, Yesenia Robles and I thought it is sad how a woman fell from about 1, 200 ft - 1, 300 ft and died near Georgetown Lake. This matters because it is tragic when people die. This matters to me because this person was very unlucky to have fallen off of a cliff. This matters to education because it is important to know about new and important events around your area. This matters to the world because now they know that they have to make the roads safer and this could have affected many people. All in all, after reading the article "Women killed as jeep falls more than 1000 feet" I felt sad about what had happened.

1 comment:

  1. Davis-

    Remember to talk about what matters and why in your topic sentence. Also, the paragraph should be a summary of what matters, how it connects to you, to education, and to the world. Then, finish with a clear concluding sentence. Please redo. Good work hyperlinking your article, and including the author and title.

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