Thursday, October 21, 2010

PLN12

After reading the short article,”2 Held in Boulder County Break-ins”, I started to feel less safe because two car break-ins happened. This matters to me because i am scared to get my family’s cars broken into. This matters to education because people need to learn how to keep their things safe from robbers. This matters to the world because car companies need to make it so cars cannot be broken into so people can not get robbed. All in all, after reading the article,”2 Held in Boulder County Break-ins”, I felt scared and less safe.

28 comments:

  1. BEST ONE I HAVE SEEEEEEEN..... WHAT DOES THIS MEAN!>!!>!>! DOUBLE RAINBOW <<>>.<<>>

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  2. good ideas conneting it to you but you were moving to much

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  3. You need to memorize your information, you aid uuuuummmmm... quite a bit.

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  4. Prepare before don't just wing it next time

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  5. You did good but you need more detail in your writing.

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  6. Where's your notecard??? You just kind of said the same thing over and over, try adding other interesting facts into your speech. Good question.

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  7. I like the speech and had good information.

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  8. you said uuuuh a lot. You dont know your information well enough.

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  9. IIIIIIIII AGREEE WITH JUSTIN! GOOD PRESENTATION!

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  10. nice notes, next time have notes, it helps.

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  11. Good presentation and I liked how you said what mattered to you.

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  12. you said "uhh" alot, connection to "rigor redefined"

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  13. Prepare better next time so you know what to say. Interesting connection.

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  14. nice work, connect to education though

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  15. Not very good try to prepare better next time

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  16. good presentation. try to make it flow a little more. Good eye contact and good projection. Great Question.

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  17. DAVIS YOUR THE BEST... AROUND NOTHIN IS GONNA EVER KEEP YA DOWN

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  18. Swaying back and forth.
    Good memory, looking at audience.
    :):):):):)(:(:(:(:(:(:(: :P:P:P:P:P:P:P :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D 3:) <devil

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  19. good artical but you didnt have the qustion

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  20. Nice job Davis. You should try not to shift back and forth on your feet when you are presenting.

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  21. Yon need to work on building stronger ideas you had basically the same point for each Why does this matter

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  22. Davis-

    Your entry is a good start, but lacking a lot of detail. Where is the summary of what you read? Expand on how each of those points connects to you. Connect this piece to others you have read or to other things you have studied.

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